The Estate 1
By Asa Montreaux, pen name Andrew James
Fade in
Fade in
Small city in the
northwest, large estate, camera pans in slowly, castle like house,
camera pans to the inside. Vincent inside, to the main hall of the
home. He is arriving home from University, almost finished his
Graduate degree. He is in a sour mood.
Vincent: (talking
to himself) Well, mother, I can't say it was a terrible year. It is
just that the whole year I thought of how terrible
what happened was. I thought of what exactly it was that happened.
It didn't make sense, and I think it drove me crazy, though I am the
last person to go crazy, ever.
Matilda:
(Mother) What are you saying, dear.
Vincent:
What, were you hearing something? I have been making no sounds though
I was about to call for you and annouce my arrival.
Matilda:
Yes it is nice to have you home. I have missed you very much.
Vincent:
Well I am not staying for forever. You certainly know this.
Matilda:
No? I suppose I only ask of you to spend time with me?
Vincent:
But when does it end? Your certainly haven't been lonely. This new
husband of yours has surely been here all of the year. Just what is
it he wants. You have two of these bloody husband men floating
around.
Matilda:
He wants nothing. You know he and I love each other.
Vincent:
Love? Two people of your age do not love one another. I had thought
you and father loved each other, but I will never believe in love
again. There is no such thing.
Matilda:
Don't be silly Vincent. Come now, your sister is wanting to see you.
We've been anticipating you for several days.
Vincent:
My sister. She is the one who only I suspect might not be a goddamn
whore. Very well, take me to her.
In
the dining area the sister has been having tea. Her friend
accompanies her and she is attractive, receptive
to a lot of information about Vincent,
similarly innocent seeming, thought Vincent would not admit it, and
someone who he would be interested
in.
Vincent:
Hello sister, I have missed you like no other woman for miles, for...
planets, for galaxies.
Teresa:
Hello brother, I have missed you, been doing the missing too.
Vincent:
Hello May, I haven't seen you since last summer. You look very well.
May:
(acting confidently, thinking of what she is saying beforehand) I
remember.
Vincent
pauses. Looks at her.
Vincent: Of course
you do, he said.
Teresa:
Vincent, you're being obvious.
Vincent:
Don't say such things when I have only just arrived here. Come, there
is something I have to show you.
He
takes them upstairs to his private dwelling area, where there is a
package waiting for him that he opens quickly.
Vincent:
This is one of those things I have been working on in the grey area
beyond when I am working on what I am supposed to be working on. It
is an automated home defence system.
Teresa:
It looks like something a terrorist would make.
Vincent:
No, no, don't be silly. Although I have been feeling very, very dark.
There is a bomb thrower. There only twice the size of bullets, but
like little atomic bombs. Thirty feet radius of complete
obliteration. Nothing survives, like nothing ever existed. There's a
laser recognistion system that feeds into my tablet.
Teresa:
Is there something your worried about? They don't know who or what
killed Dad.
Vincent:
He is not dead. Most certainly not.
Teresa: Then why
are you designing these things.
Vincent: They make
me feel safer. Something happened. Somethign was obliterated. And I'm
obssessed with it.
May: Sounds
interesting. Don't obliterate me.
Vincent and Teresa
look at each other.
Vincent: I'll try.
It is unlikely. I'm pretty good at designing things. That work for
you?
May: I trust you.
Your unlikely to screw up.
Vincent: Wonderful.
I'll set this up later. I think it is dinner time near abouts. I have
forgotten to eat all day.
Next scene at the
dinner table. Low lighting. Table is big, although it is still very
tense. This is the first appearance of Rick, the new husband, who is
less handsome than Vincent's Dad, hardly richer. Vincent is very
suspicious of him and he cannot hide it.
Maltida: Now
everyone sit. Vincent be calm. You are so anxious. That's not the
Vincent I know.
The kitchen has
prepared dinner and it should only be a few minutes. Rick, Vincent
has just arrived home. He should be here for the summer, at least.
Vincent: I've
consented to almost that much.
Rick: Hi Vincent.
Nice to have you here.
Maltida: See. You
get along wonderfully.
Quiet for a few
moments. Then May says.
May: What kind of
things do you have time to do this year outside your studies?
He doesn't want to
to reveal what he was working on, though May doesn't know this.
Vincent: They have
just built a whole new building. There is a nice bar and restaurant.
I've had time to sit there and chat about philosophy and try
different brews.
Rick: Drinking is
something most men do when there feeling depressed. What would be
your motive?
Vincent: (looking
at the kicthen, as the staff bring out the food) I wonder.
Several traits and
plates placed along the table. Everyone is reasonably hungry, though
Vincent has lost his appetite again.
Matilda: Eat more
Vincent.
Vincent: Sorry, I'm
just feeling a little unsettled.
A few moments pause
again, and again May.
May: Have you been
growing your hair longer.
Vincent: Who? Me.
May: You, yes.
She was staring at
him admiringly.
Vincent: Oh. Yes. I
haven't had it cut since Christmas. Since December. No reason. I
wanted to. Didn't want to cut it. I've certainly missed you May. I
had a feeling you would be here.
May: You always
know these things.
Vincent: That I do.
Rick: Now aren't
you seeing someone out there on the campus?
Vincent: No, no.
I'm not. Not for quite some time. Right, May. You knew that, right?
May: I did know
that. I heard that.
Rick: Well don't
think you can hide anything from me.
Flash forward to
after dinner. They are bored, it is a long night ahead, and they
haven't spent time together. The three young adults go outside for a
walk along the grounds. Ambling slowly together, the sun all but
disappeared.
Teresa: I don't
think you know what it has been like with Rick. It has been very
scary. But mom denies it.
Vincent: I bet it
was scary. I imagine the worst things. I'm sorry it has been this
way. Truly.
Teresa: I know you
don't want him to be here. You're very vocal about that.
Vincent: Yeah but
he doesn't know that.
Teresa: Yes he
does, you just don't like to admit it.
Vincent: I suppose.
Sorry May, we don't mean to stress you out.
May: It's okay.
Nothing unusual has happened.
Vincent: No. No, I
suppose not.
Teresa: The one
year anniversary is tommorrow.
There is a noise
ahead of them. Fairly loud. Possibly heard from the house. They stop.
There is a glowing light. There is something there.
Vincent: Hello?
May: What the hell!
They hesitate, but
ultimately need to approach to find out what it was. There is a
ghost, an ethereal appearing person. He looks severe, he looks like
he has a warning to purport.
Vincent: What is
it? What do you want?
Ghost: (speaking
very slowly) I have come here to say to you that I have been
murdered.
Vincent: What
happened? How would we be able to help you?
Ghost: It is the
man. It is the man inside the home that has killed me.
Vincent: I'm sorry.
We will call the police.
Ghost: No. The man
inside has killed me. And. He has killed your father. You must do
something.
Vincent: Is he
dangerous to us?
Ghost: He is very
dangerous. But his past is what he wants to destroy. Come. Come quick
and see. Before I have to go.
Thye move closer and
with one hand he opens his dress shirt, on the right hand side, there
is a wound, a deep knife wound, and as he shows it to them he moans
silently in pain, and then dissapears, into the air.
May: Oh dear!
Teresa: Let's hurry
back to the house.
May: But he's in
there!
Teresa: That's no
matter now.
They run away. The
camera stays.
They are in a room
in Vincent's chamber. The room is dark and they are thinking of what
to do. They discuss secretively what to do.
May: Do you think
he knows that were on to him?
Teresa: No. I don't
think he has any idea. He is so self-absorbed. He sits in that living
room with her for hours, and thinks of nothing but himself and his
comfort.
After more
consideration. Vincent's head on his chin.
Vincent: No. There
is no way that he knows. But we must be careful now. It is when we
have something to hide that we are discovered, as has so plainly
happened to Rick himself now. The Ghosts wants us to act. And yet I
will not. I wonder at the happiness we could still have if we could
only forget this happening. We could still achieve the things we want
to achieve. But will my consience allow me? Will I be able to allow
him to kill again?
May: Maybe someone
else can do something. We can't be the only one who knows.
Vincent: (Gravely)
We are the only ones who know.
May: We can do
something. We have to tell Matilda. We have to get out of here
Vincent: I'm not
sure you know Matilda so well. She will not listen to it. She won't
believe us.
Teresa: He's right.
She is far too proud. And it does sound a little crazy.
It is quiet and they
are not sure what to do. They want to make a decision now but it is
not easy.
May: Are we going
to be able to sleep tonight?
Teresa: I won't be
able to sleep given this happening.
Vincent: No. I will
stay awake. You'll be able to sleep. I'll sit watch.
May: When will you
sleep?
Vincent: Tomorrow.
I sleep in the day. We only have to wait for him to leave.
May: Are you sure?
Vincent: Yes. This
is the best thing we can do.
Lights off except
for one now. They have blankets on the floor. Trying to sleep.
Vincent is looking out the window at the moment, giving up his gaze
on the doors to his chamber temporarily. He looks to where the ghost
had been, pondering what he was, and if it was real.
May: What are you
doing?
Vincent: (turns
around, only a little startled.) Oh. Oh my, I lost my vigil for a
moment. I was thnking of the ghost again. I'm not sure what he
meant. And I am not sure if I can trust him.
May: It is hard to
tell. I believe him.
She walks over and
sits on the edge of the couch with him, as his body faces the window
slightly still.
Vincent: Is Teresa
still asleep?
May: Yes. She is.
It is just me. I couldn't sleep.
Vincent: Oh. I see.
And here you found me distracted by the ghost again.
May: I have. I've
found you well out of yourself. You've been so irresponsible.
Vincent: I am
ashamed to have been discovered, and yet how skillfully, and timidly,
by you, lovely you.
May: And what will
you do now?
Vincent: Funny you
should ask. All I know is that I don't want anything bad to ever
happen to you.
They are only so
close on the couch. And they lean towards each other. His hand pulls
her forward by the shoulder at the end, and then they kiss, quietly,
holding there lips together, kissing again, there eyes closed.
Int. Matilda's room
the next day.
Rick is pacing a
little outside his awareness, moving a little quicker than he would
like to be noticed doing. He is anxious about something. Matilda
doesn't appear worried, doing her makeup.
Matilda: Is
something the matter Rick?
Rick: No. I don't
think anything's wrong. Do you?
Matilda: Why. No.
No, I don't.
Rick has stopped
pacing, but now races out of the room, his footsteps audibly stopping
in the hallway.
Rick: Was there
someone here?
Matilda: Why no
Rick. There wasn't.
Rick: Did you hear
the noises this last evening.
Matilda: Is
everything alright, Rick?
Rick: Yes, yes.
Sorrry darling. You see, we have to tell them.
Matilda: Well I
know that.
Rick: No. We have
to tell them now.
Matidla: Oh I think
they know.
Rick: What?
Matilda: Oh just
Vincent. He heard about it.
Vincent: We must
tell them tonight.
Matilda: Well
alright. Sit down. Please don't be so bothered. You're worrying me.
Int. Living room
The whole family and
May are assembled. They are quiet except for Rick who is still
flustered. Vincent looks pale pale and disturbed by all this.
Rick: We have
something to tell you now.
Matilda: Oh. No, I
will do it.
Rick: Okay, okay.
Matilda: You see,
we are having our ceremony a month from now.
Teresa: Wow. That's
soon, don't you think? Mom?
Matilda: Well,
we've thought about it, and we would both like to go ahead with it
and stop worrying about it all together.
Vincent: Maybe if
you are worrying about it that should tell you something.
Matilda: No you are
no stranger to this news Vincent. Please be calm about this.
May: Well. That's
wonderful for the two of you. I wish you the best with it.
Rick: Thank you for
your approval of this, all of you. We know it is soon, but this way
we will all have stability for ourselves sooner.
There is a noise in
the kitchen. Something fell and broke. Rick turns around, though acts
as if he is the one who didn't notice anything out of the ordinary.
Rick: We've been
preparing for an announcement party this evening. Hor'douvres. Please
show yourself and mingle with some of our guests. We ask you to
behave yourselves and drink responsibly. Don't drink too much.
Vincent: Can we go
now?
Int. Living room and
entrance hall area. Camera pans through party, fairly large
attendance. People talking and laughing somewhat about the
engagement. Servers weaving through crowds with wine and drinks also.
Then to Vincent and May.
Vincent: This is
one of those moments people would say you need to smile, even if you
don't feel like it.
May: What if you
have never felt less like smiling.
Vincent: Yes. I
sure am glad you are here, that's one thing I don't need to fake.
Slight flash forward
they've walked down the stairs, started walking through the party.
They need something to do and Vincent grabs a cocktail and a man is
standing right next to him. It is the county judge. He is a stern
though grand fatherly looking fellow.
Judge Kearnes:
Hello Vincent.
Vincent: Hi Mr.
Kearnes. Good to see you.
Judge Kearnes: This
is a nice engagment that your having. Glad you could be here.
Vincent: Glad I
could be here too.
Judge Kearnes: You
don't sound so sure of yourself.
Vincent: Well, I am
happy. Miss my father you know.
Judge Kearnes:
(sighs, looking directly at him.) Is everything alright? I trust your
mother. I know the announcement has come quickly. I know this
happened very fast. She only does things when she is sure about
them.
Vincent: (looks off
into the distance) Normally, that is the case. (downs rest of
cocktail. May walking by.) May!
May: I think we
need to stay a little longer.
Vincent: Let's get
out of there. I can't be here. It's awful. Really, I don't care what
this Rick says.
For all I know and
hear he's a murderer. (Several heads turn. They walk through the back
doors onto the lawn)
Ext. Dark, low
lights. Slight buzzing sound, murmurous noises from the party.
May: There is no
place we can go.
Vincent: No. We can
come out here. We shouldn't go too far or we'll see that ghost again.
May: I thought you
want to know more from him.
Vincent: Not
anymore. No. I don't want to hear anything from him again. Forget it.
May: Tell me
everything's going to be okay.
Vincent: (refuses
to answer at first, then reluctant, forced, a little sarcastic
enthusiasm.) Everything is going to be okay.
May: Good. I don't
want to doubt your both going to be okay.
End Scene. Camera
moves away. Sitting on a bench, close together, holding hands,
looking somber.
Int. Several hours
later, many guest have left, starting to leave. Rick and Matilda and
Teresa. In Matilda's chamber.
Rick: Where is
Vincent? (He is very angry, pacing in a circle.)
Matilda: (seems
unbothered by his continal anger, perhaps mistaking it for the way he
is.) Rick honey, he was downstairs. I am sure he is around.
Rick: He hasn't
done anything respectful. He hasn't shown any of the respect for any
of this he should have. What is going on? What is he thinking?
Teresa: Mom, I
don't think he wants to be here. He doesn't approve of this
engagement at all. He's been depressed about it the whole time he's
been here.
Matilda:
(lightening her expression for the very first time) I do hope he's
feeling alright. Rick, honey, maybe we should push it back some.)
What do you think?
Rick: What?
(innapropriatly flustered and now worried.) No, no. It has to be now.
Come on. (deliberating) We've spent time arranging all of these
things.
Matilda: I don't
think that matters. We can rebook everything later.
Teresa: I think
that's a good idea. We all thought it was quick. Quicker than what
usually happens.
Matilda: Yes I
think that's a good idea.
Rick: (allows a
moment for them to feel that he is going to not force them to do it
now) Let's just keep going with things this way. Everyone is more or
less fine with it except Vincent. He needs to pull his act together.
Int. Dining Room
All sitting at
table, eating dinner quitely. Reluctant to be there, doing as Rick
says. No one talking. Sound of forks and knives, quiet chewing. Then
the room shakes momentarily. The lights flicker. Then they go out.
The ghost appears. This time, he glares at Rick. It appears as the
father.
Matilda: Jesus.
Ghost: Do you know
who killed me?
Matilda: What?
Ghost: Do you know
who killed me? (turns to Vincent) Do you know who killed me?
Vincent: (Can't
speak) Do I know who killed you?
Ghost: (Angrily)
Who killed me?
Vincent: It was,
Rick.
Matilda: Vincent!
Vincent: It was
Rick that killed my father.
Ghost: Yes, yes, it
was. (The Ghost musters the energy to point his finger at Rick.)
Rick: That is
ridiculous. I know not what you speak of. (He rises from his seat. He
swats at the ghosts, who backs away and then dissapears.)
Matilda: What in
God's name was that?
Vincent: Everyone
has seen it. Look at what was here! Look! Did you hear what he said
to us?
Rick: Quiet. No one
at all needs to get worked up about this. As far as I know this all
must have been some sort of prank, or some short panic we all went
through. No one needs to speak of this.
Teresa: No one said
they were going to speak of anything.
Matilda: We have do
something. Let's get out of here.
Rick: (runs over to
her and as if he were about to grab here, in her face, looking into
her eyes) No, no one need to leave her right now. No one is leaving
here.
Teresa: You don't
need to talk to her like that.
Rick: That's
enough.
Teresa: Okay, just
leave her alone.
Rick: You. (He now
walks towards Vincent) What have you done? You are responsible for
this. I have no idea were these accusation have come from?
Vincent: What? Do
you think that I think you killed my father? Don't be so quick to
defend yourself, as you are beginning to sound awfully guilty.
Rick: I haven't
asked for your advice. Matilda, you know I have not done this, don't
you?
Matilda: (Looks at
him) Of course I do not suspect you, my dear. Please calm down, and
just have a seat again. We will get through this.
Teresa: Maybe
that's enough Vincent.
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